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Shadows are a real problem, they detract from your photo. Simply add another light that cancels the shadows. But what was that cartoon fish that lost his glasses? Ah' most of you are probably too young to remember. But you have him perfect in that second photo, above her head. That aside, I like her hair, neet, just a little wild sugesting a mood. Your working ok with her posing, maybe a little too sculpted. But she lacks expression, you have it in the first photo, but then nothing, almost expressionless. When your working with her posing, get her to laugh a little, or turn some music on, somethings to get her emotions flowing, smile more, look sideways at the camera, lick her lips, anything, but just get her to seduce the camera.
Good Luck
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