My first site please critique

[LadyBlue]

Hi everyone.

I would really like to thank everyone on this board who has helped me and provided me with so much information . I know it took a long time but I think I finally got the basics down well kinda lol.

And I finally have my site up with all links and banners working. I'm so excited!

Now I just wanted to ask if I could get some critiques for my site. I already implimented the suggestions made previously to me in my other post about banners and if any one sees anything else that I could fix or make better please feel free to let me know.

Thanks again. Click here to view my site

[Alej]

fresh and simple for now,

maybe some extra text, a little box with a shemale pornstar description?

7 - 10

[mojoman]

there's a skim, i clicked on a top thumb, and got redirected to a parking page on one of them.

if you're going to use a script that skims, i would, take the top set of thumbs and ensure that they're not skimmed by hardcoding them, or, at least just the top row. they're going to get the most clicks, and so you should get them all

banners at the top - above the fold is giong to get the most attention. again if you're a technophobe, then hardcode one, but, i'd suggest that you get your head around something like openx - it really is very powerful.

also, if you're not going to count on repeat visitors - set up google analytics if you haven't already - then rather than losing clicks to skims, hardcode all the thumbs?

i'm sure you'll find that some thumbs get more clicks than others as they may be more appealing, so keep them, and get those clicks

[scoopyu]

I will put some ads on enter page

[micho]

simple site, good. I would just delete the entering site

[he77war]

Nice. but is it a typo on your title tags "Shamale Porn"?? anyway, you can add some free movie series or daily video console to your site if your sponsor have them or look for others that have it. Good luck with your tgp.

[pam]

<title>Shamale Porn - shemaletopia.com</title>

*yawn* boring. The site reads boring to me. You are also losing valuable real estate.

You may want to fix things in your trade script as I ended up at yoursponsor.com 3 times out of 5 clicks.

[born2blog]

what Pam said!!

...but, overall simple/basic layout, loads quick (always a plus), good start in my opinion, gotta start somewhere!!

[fsudirectory]

Id get rid of the warning page unless some site you submit to requires it

[LadyBlue]

Thank you everyone for your replies.

I have corrected that typo in my title tags horrible speller combined with way too many late nights with very little sleep lol.

I thought the warning page would be a good idea since I live in the US in NYC I just thought that would help cover my ass a bit in case a minor happened to stumble across my page.

I am trying to fix the skim. I am totally new at traffic and skimming and learning comus has been a huge project for me even though I am very computer literate. At least for comus there were tutorials.

Unfortunately for epowertrader (which came combined free with my comus 2% skim) I don't see any tutorials or anything and I'm not sure how to use it. So it may be a while before I can fix that problem with the skim.

Unfortunately I also don't know what hardcoding is lol. So till I learn can't really do that for my top thumbs And I would love to set up set up google analytics I just haven't learned that far yet on how to do so .

And I definitely plan to add some more text, pics etc it's just kinda barebones right now because I'm still learning. But I'm really proud of what I accomplished so far.

[laban]

Originally Posted by LadyBlue

Hi everyone.

I would really like to thank everyone on this board who has helped me and provided me with so much information . I know it took a long time but I think I finally got the basics down well kinda lol.

And I finally have my site up with all links and banners working. I'm so excited!

Now I just wanted to ask if I could get some critiques for my site. I already implimented the suggestions made previously to me in my other post about banners and if any one sees anything else that I could fix or make better please feel free to let me know.

Thanks again. Click here to view my site

Cool to see the site, i am also thinking about that shemalesites could be a good thing, i am also new...newer perhaps and learning and trying to learn hard,so can't give you any advice...let the advanced do that. Over and out

[Graphics4Adult]

you got a good and simple site there . cheers

[dirtwars]

nice site, nice to see you posting again. I'm not sure about how good your trade script is, not familiar with that kind of stuff. Was curious if what are the main keywords you are targeting.

I seem think tranny porn, and shemale porn. as the main ones. If so up the word porn a few more times. Other than that it looks solid. Now is the time to go out and get backlinks. Those are some tough terms to hit, but if you have good link building structure and are patient. . . over time this site could work.

[dirtwars]

Originally Posted by pam

<title>Shamale Porn - shemaletopia.com</title>

*yawn* boring. The site reads boring to me. You are also losing valuable real estate.

You may want to fix things in your trade script as I ended up at yoursponsor.com 3 times out of 5 clicks.

I never knew bots could get bored, learn something new every day. But point well received . . . expanding on that I would deliver a bit more relevant content than your website address. e.g.- Shemale Porn - Low lying fruit keywords, theme keywords (or vice versa).

[ScreaM]

Not bad but the thumbs could be better.

[porndragon]

I like it not a bad site at all alot better than the first one I ever opened

[Auf Mauf]

Definitely look good for the first time,wish you a good luck with this site.

[ristac]

Most of what has already been said but your exit page, do you own the site it is linking to? If not buy yourself a mainstream domain name and direct to that instead..

[Dupont]

Looks clean, Id spiced the text for the links

[gecko]

Other then what has been already been said... Looks good to me..